Saturday, January 28, 2012

Deep Dig : Saturday Centus

LinkAlthough I provided a list of prompts for Jenny Matlock, off on my tangent, I have no idea which one she will pull out of her hat each week and I haven't written down any stories in advance...but there are many ideas floating or filed in my head... Go HERE to read all the creative writings and write one to contribute yourself !

Here are Jenny's rules:

THE PROMPT THIS WEEK IS: We know where all
the bodies are buried in RED.
WORD COUNT - 100 words total PLUS the eight words o
f the prompt...108 words total
STYLE OF WRITING - Any
ADDITIONAL PICTURES IF DESIRED

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Deep DigLink
by Nonna Beach

As the sun scorched ground was spun by an errant, harsh wind, Leland and Dina surveyed their packed up household. It was moving day after 50 years of living on the shores of the dead, shrinking Salton Sea.

They bought land in 1960 to escape suburbia, among other things and built their dream home. Happy memories lingered as they walked through the house and out into the back yard.


They stopped, praying over the little graves of wonderful family pets. "Yes, we know where all the bodies are buried, they thought, " and how well they covered the victims mob hit man Leland had buried deep in the desert sand... "

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Postscript:
For sweetest things turn sourest by their deeds,
Lilies that fester smell far worse than weeds..."
~ William Shakespeare ~


18 Tasty Comments:

anitamombanita said...

Oh, I was just going to say "how sweet", and then your little twist hit me...nicely done! (and thanks for sharing the prompt with Mrs. Jenny). :)

Nonna Beach said...

My parents actually bought land and intended to live at the Salton Sea.

They took us kids to visit the land once and I prayed a silent prayer, "Please don't EVER let us live there !" Thankfully, my prayer was answered and we never did !!!

Dazee Dreamer said...

Way to get me feeling all warm and fuzzy, and then sticking the knife in. Very well done.

Karen S. said...

Oh thanks so much for such a cool prompt, I just wasn't sure which way to go either! This was such a great read...it began so sweet and smooth and wham hit by a mobster! Oh yeah, this is one great story that should continue.... very nicely done! Thanks!

Bookie said...

Oh a great little story here! Nice zinger on the end too.

Judie said...

You forgot to tell us where they buried LELAND! Dead men tell no tales, Nonna! Brava!!

Sue said...

It was so lovely and then ka-pow.

Nice job!

=)

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

You are always full of surprises, Nonna. I love that about you. What a "fun fact," too, that your parents bought land at the Salton Sea.

Great piece and prompt. Thank you.

xoRobyn

Trishelle said...

Excellent twist at the end! Brilliant!

Gail said...

I always like surprises...good one!

Kelly Sedinger said...

Sooner or later all truths are revealed, huh? Nice work!

Jo said...

omg ... such a sinister little twist Nonna ... and I loved it!

Tgoette said...

What a great prompt to return to SC with! Loved your story and the unexpected twist at the end! Great job!

Kara said...

great story...love the pictures too

Ames said...

Diabolical Nonna. That is also why I could never burry one of my fur children. I might have to move from the house. Cremation is better. Then you can take them with.~Ames

Lisa Taylor said...

Wonderful twist at the end! The retro pic suited it so well too. :-)

moondustwriter said...

I just found last weeks Centus inspired by you and so wrote one.
Yours was perfect something hidden til the last...

Jenny said...

Nonna, this was brilliant!

I really, really hope that the mob doesn't come after you to find out where the body is!

Hopefully it's all bulldozed down and now and covered in condo's!

What a fun read! I loved the twist and totally didn't see it coming!

You're wonderful!